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OW Draft 2 - Opening SceneJames Paine stood in the sunlight. He flexed his tanned calves and biceps and pushed shaggy blond hair from his thin face. In his hand, he gripped a striped ball. His long fingers clung to the textured material, reaching nearly halfway around. He narrowed his eyes and glared down the field at his opponent, who was hunched over with his hands forward. A breeze flowed through and a crowd cheered.OW Draft 2 - Opening Scene
James drew back the ball. His arm muscles bulged. In a blur of color, his arm snapped forward and the ball whistled through the air toward his son. A boy of seventeen, Zidaiku Paine leapt into the air and wrapped his arms around the
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OW Draft 2 - End of Ch1A short while later, Zidaiku approached the apartment. He gently turned the doorknob and pushed, carefully controlling the door to keep it from squeaking. He expected to find total darkness inside, but the television in the corner was on, repeating the menu sequence of The Gift, one of Angel’s favorites. He smiled, knowing he could tease her for this. Silently, he approached the couch and leaned over the back. Wrapped in Zidaiku’s blaket was not Angel, but Melina. She was asleep, her hair fanned out across his pillow and her mouth slightly open. Even in sleep, her eyelids looked heavy and swollen with fatigue.OW Draft 2 - End of Ch1
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Orphan Wars - Snippet 1 Back in the apartment, just as the sun began to shine through the spaces between skyscrapers and clouds, Zidaiku’s eyes shot open and he let out the breath he had been holding. Still feeling alarmed, he rose and took in his surroundings. Instead of the hostile Narrows, he was safely back at home, wrapped in his usual blanket, and his heart slowed down to its usual pace. He took a few slow, deep breaths, and tried to reassemble his memory. The strange and mysterious events of the night before felt like a dream to him now and he almost couldn’t remember if they had actually happened. But as he awakened to fullOrphan Wars - Snippet 1
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Pokemon Indigo: Prologue Pt. 1“Go, Dragonite!”Pokemon Indigo: Prologue Pt. 1
Indigo threw his Poké Ball high in the air. It caught a shining beam from the floodlights before falling to the ground in the middle of the wide arena. The ball burst open in a flash of light and the form of a tall, winged dragon appeared, slowly fading from its white energy form to its solid mass. It let out a loud cry, and the crowds surrounding them cheered.
Indigo pointed a finger toward the green Vibrava crouched on the other side of the arena. “Now, Dragonite!” he cried. “Use Outrage!”
The Dragonite roared again and glided forwar
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OW Draft 2 - End of Ch1A short while later, Zidaiku approached the apartment. He gently turned the doorknob and pushed, carefully controlling the door to keep it from squeaking. He expected to find total darkness inside, but the television in the corner was on, repeating the menu sequence of The Gift, one of Angel’s favorites. He smiled, knowing he could tease her for this. Silently, he approached the couch and leaned over the back. Wrapped in Zidaiku’s blaket was not Angel, but Melina. She was asleep, her hair fanned out across his pillow and her mouth slightly open. Even in sleep, her eyelids looked heavy and swollen with fatigue.OW Draft 2 - End of Ch1
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